Unintended Consequences: A 9/11 Inspired Collection of Short Stories (Fictional) Series, Part I, Story 3

PART I: THE GOOD
STORY 3

Anthony Fuzoli, Sr., attempts to distract himself by people watching in Terminal B of John F. Kennedy Airport. He realized he’d been tapping his watch impatiently as flight after flight was delayed that Tuesday morning. It was a bright, unseasonably warm September day in New York City and he was flying to Indianapolis to make final preparations for Junior’s wedding.

As he eyed a young couple struggling with their baby stroller, the young father shaking the contraption to try and fold it for stowing reminded Tony of his son. The young man, who looked like he might still be in high school, had a thick wave of dark hair shaking as he struggled to fold the stroller. His wife, holding their baby, touched his arm to calm him. Tony wondered if they might be travelling to introduce their young one to his or her parents. He imagined what his own grandson, Anthony III, might look like one day. Would he have the signature Fuzoli wave to his thick black mane?

He was shaken from his daydream when the departures board suddenly lit up red with every flight showing cancelled or delayed. He wondered what was going on until an announcement was made overhead. Looking at his watch and noting the time, 9:51 a.m. People were confused and bustling about the terminal now, many heading for food courts to see if they could catch the news. It wasn’t a few minutes later, a woman turned her laptop towards Tony to show images of the towers falling. He quickly dialed Junior’s 317-area-code number.

Exasperated and astonished, Anthony Jr, answered with, “Can you believe this? Three days before my wedding? My hometown is under attack?” They discussed how his father would even make it to Indy in time for Friday’s wedding, let alone the rehearsal dinner, for which he’d shelled out a lot of cash.

His son had met his person senior year at Indiana University. Rebecca Anthis grew up in rural Decker, in the Southwest corner of the state, known for it’s rich agriculture, especially its melons. The name Anthis was Dutch and her pioneer ancestors had cultivated the Cypress Swamps just above the White River at the turn of the 19th century. When Junior had learned of her heritage and that the Anthises had found Knox County, Indiana, with other Dutch families from the Genesee Valley of New York, like the Deckers, Kuykendalls and Jacobuses, he’d felt a deepening of their connection. She wasn’t just some “hayseed from the sticks,” the way New Yorkers tended to think of Hoosiers.

Her father had built a small empire on growing some of the best-tasting watermelons and cantaloupes from that part of the state. He’d taken to Anthony right away because the two of them were pranksters and had a sharp, sarcastic wit. Anthony was studying law and had big aspirations. Bud Anthis knew that this kid meant business and would take good care of his precious Becky Sue. She hated the nickname and only went by Rebecca these days.

Bud called immediately after Mr. Fuzoli to see if there was anything he could do. He even offered to cover the expense of the rehearsal dinner planned at St. Elmo’s Steakhouse, the best known restaurant in downtown Indianapolis. Rebecca told her father that it would all work out and not to worry about it. He’d already done so much to make sure her Friday evening wedding, September 14th, would be magical.

Junior was distracted the rest of the day, receiving one phone call after another from friends and family back home. His cousin worked in the South Tower and had run errands that morning instead of showing up for work. That decision, which seemed irresponsible to him at the time, had saved his life. Anthony knew a couple of others, including a high school classmate who served NYFD, Fire House Twelve, that narrowly escaped the second collapsed tower.

Rebecca had worked diligently even as she carried a full load of senior-level coursework to plan her fairy tale wedding. An Indianapolis cousin had recommended Tabernacle Church on the near northside. Now she feared everything might be placed on hold. It seemed the world was crashing around her. Tony noticed his future bride’s nerves frazzling and suggested they go out for drinks and a nice meal.

His father phoned while they were dining at The Slippery Noodle that night to say he’d made it to North Jersey where he was renting the next to last car on the lot. It had been such a surreal day with overloaded trains heading out of the city, some passengers were ghostly white covered in toxic dust blank, distance in their eyes. He assured his son and future daughter-in-law that he would be there early Thursday.

On the long drive, Senior wondered again what Indiana’s largest city held over their hometown. He’d always envisioned Junior becoming a junior partner at his Brooklyn firm. He loved Rebecca dearly but wondered what spell or potion she’d used to enchant his lovesick son. At that moment, his son texted for a progress update. He spoke into his phone, voice-to-text, that he was entering the outskirts of Columbus, Ohio. The news on the radio was grim. A reporter relaying details from a remote area of Pennsylvania which he’d traveled near hours ago. United Flight 93, had been hijacked, the reporter said evenly, passengers rallying cry of “Let’s roll.” minutes before rushing the cockpit.

The wedding was everything Rebecca had dreamed. The happy couple settled into a neighborhood with 100’s of young families in the suburb of Fishers. They were expecting, but not Anthony III, a baby girl they would name America. The senior Fuzoli was not disappointed. He loved the name choice and began calling her America, The Beautiful. He was thankful for his cross-country drive that showed him just how beautiful it was, even the flyover states like Ohio and Indiana.

Unintended Consequences: A 9/11 Inspired Collection of Short Stories (Fictional)

(EDITOR’S NOTE: Facebook followers can skip to the end of this section and start below the image. I sectioned these stories-The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly-so we’ll start with The Good.)

FB POST: This Friday, unbelievably, marks the 25th Anniversary of the worst terrorist attack on our soil. I got the idea early last year to begin writing a collection of short stories (fictional, but based in reality) to commemorate the somber memorial. Then I got cold feet. Whether it was my self-consciousness about publishing my work or sensitivity toward the survivors and those who perished 9/11/2001, I quit writing. Only last month did I run the idea by my daughters who tend to be more sensitive on social issues than I. They both told me to trust my gut. And even though I’d feel ok had I published, the deadline is long past.

The title is Unintended Consequences.

My idea, and this just struck me today, is to publish the stories as a series on my blog and share them here for a few days around the anniversary. This timeline was going to be page one and sort of a reference for the stories to follow. (End of post, clipped).

PART I: THE GOOD 

Amanda Boudreaux heads East down Park Avenue, her favorite Zydeco CD in the Ford Focus’ stereo, pumping out music. It’s just another Tuesday and she’s about to make her weekly stop at Krispy Kreme, just ahead on the right. The toe-tapping music from her childhood home on the bayou makes her morning mood bright. The traffic is better on Park than the bottle neck near the mall on Apalachee Parkway and she’s happy as she swings through the Bojangles’ parking lot and into the drive-thru next door.

Across town, her boss folds down the sports page of the Tallahassee Democrat as his wife bends to kiss him goodbye. Ted Williams is taking time to savor his last bit of coffee before he leaves their northside home. He’ll take the backway into town today. He’s in no hurry, as his first stop is his daughter’s private school on Meridian, then a quick jaunt to his dentist’s office.

“You sure you don’t mind dropping Lorelei this morning,” she asks. He assures Madeline that he’s got plenty of time and he’s happy to do it. As he hears her Mercedes back out of the garage, he also savors her image. For a woman of 42, she has certainly kept her feminine curves intact. He smiles, then looks down at his garish weight hanging over the dining room chair he occupies at the moment. He can’t remember when the scales finally topped 300, but he’s been determined to exercise and lose some weight.

Miss Boudreaux rounds her station in the plush lobby of the Williams Insurance Agency, balancing her coffee mug on top of the box of donuts, as her oversized purse slides down her right arm. The pulse of the Zydeco music echoing in her ears seems to match the rhythm and pace of her heart. She sets the donuts and coffee on the receptionist counter and eases down into her ergonomic office chair, ready to greet her coworkers as they file in. Her typical Tuesday greeting at the ready–”At least it’s not Monday. Here, have a donut.”

Meanwhile, Ted is maneuvering his vehicle to the front of the drop-off line at North Florida Christian School. He brushes back a ribbon of his daughter’s golden locks to plant a kiss firmly on her forehead before wishing her a good day in school. She blushes, sure that her friends have seen this fatherly gesture, and steps down from the SUV without looking up. There’s minimal traffic taking the back route to Dr. White’s office and he pulls in behind her building at 7:50 a.m.

Williams Insurance Agency is a business he built from the ground up and Ted is proud of it. Growing up poor with a father in road construction, he worked hard selling insurance policies for big corporations until he was ready, nearly a decade before, to open his own business. He specializes in life and property insurance and his clientele includes most of the blue bloods in North Florida. He grew up amidst the tall, whispering pines north of town and is well-known in the community. Aside from his prospering business, he serves as head deacon at First Baptist downtown and as third basemen for the church’s softball team. His smoked brisket is the favorite at church picnics and he spins quite a yarn as he serves up the tender, succulent slices.

At 8:05, Frank Byers, the president of the Tallahassee Area Chamber of Commerce walks in late for a dental cleaning. “Late as usual,” Ted thinks to himself. He doesn’t think too highly of the lawyer and womanizer who puts on a righteous front from the second row of the church every Sunday and Wednesday night. “How goes it, Theodore?” And there it is, the name that only his mother ever used to address him when he had misstepped. “Fine, Frank. Still feeding the fishes out at Talquin?”

“You know it. Can’t say how many crickets I downed out by the dam last weekend…or how many Coors Light,” he chuckles. “Say, you’ve been sober going on how long is it?”

“Twelve years, since Lorelei was born,” Ted replies.

“Speaking of, how are the wife and daughter? Give Madeline my regards, will ya?” And he’s into the exam area before Ted can respond. The hygienist has been impatiently waiting for him, rolling her eyes as he enters.

Ted checks his watch, 8:12, and knows that he’ll be called back any minute. At his office on Duval Street, Amanda also notes the time, as she’s just answered their first call. She picks at a donut she doesn’t really want and sips what’s left of her coffee.

His cleaning finished, Ted reaches the reception desk to schedule an appointment six months out, but the staff is hovering around the receptionist’s computer monitor. She seems to be streaming a live feed from Manhattan on MSNBC. Over their gasps of horror, he hears what he believes is a low-flying jet screaming over the streets and exploding on impact. It’s 9:03 and the second tower has just been hit.

As he gets his bearings down Monroe Street, he receives a call from Amanda at work. “Sir, I don’t know if you’ve seen or heard the news this morning, but it’s awful,” her voice breaks. “There’s been some kind of attack on the World Trade Center,” but he cuts her off, veering to avoid a slow turner into the Publix parking lot. “I’m listening to what’s happened on the radio. I’m about 10 minutes from you,” he says.

“Well, don’t bother coming in, sir. The Governor has declared a state of emergency and all offices within a mile of the State Capital and his residence are shut down and being evacuated. That means we could be in danger. Do you want us to close or…” He’s not sure what to think. It stands to reason with Governor Bush being the president’s brother that the Capital City could be a target. No one seems to know what’s going on or who is behind it. All he knows is hijacked planes, buildings aflame, possible jumpers and missing jetliners. Now that the state is taking precautionary measures, he decides to do likewise.

“I think in an abundance of caution, let’s send everyone home, Mandy, and close the office for the day. If you’ll print my appointments and make the necessary calls from home, I’ll pay you your full days’ wages.”

“Yes, sir,” she says and hangs up quickly.

Ted’s a little rattled, but his dental checkup went well and he doesn’t mind working from home. What he doesn’t know is that his physical health is teetering on the brink. With clogged arteries to near blockage and undiagnosed diabetes, the three donuts he would’ve had at the office that day would have toppled him, just like the towers that were about to fall.

As fate would have it, Madeline will not become a widow on September 11, 2001, and Lorelei will not face junior high, high school or the rest of her life without her loving father.

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Nips, Rube & Stein, a segment (first draft)

Just finished the first draft of a 22-page short story, working title, "Nips, Rube & Stein."

Here is an excerpt...

The last thing Rube remembers about his father are the words he uttered after they had just buried Rube’s best friend, Nips. “He was just a dog, son. Dogs are a dime a dozen.“

But Nips was the best thing that had happened to him in his 10 years on Earth. A mongrel mutt he found in the woods at the end of their road, Nips had been Reuben Edwin Schwartz’s companion and confidant the last four years. His father, a non-religious man, had named the dog Rabbi as a joke. Rube called him Nips for his aggressive disposition toward strangers. He’d bark and nip at the heels of anyone he didn’t trust. Now that he was gone, young Rube felt lost. It marked a major turning point in his life.

Rube’s father, Ben, was a hard man with a penchant for booze and for women. All he knew was that his father upped and left one Sunday in 1974 and never came home. The plain truth was that his mother had finally had enough with his Vodka-infused debauchery. A well-known adulterer, Ben had squandered any chance of reconciliation with Mary Schwartz, so after years of neglect and emotional abuse, she kicked him out. Rube missed his dad, but he missed Nips even more.

Never had a boy found a better friend. He and Nips went everywhere together. Sometimes Henry Rollins Hicks would tag along. A stuttering, African-American boy, Henry Rollins befriended Reuben at school, where they were both bullied as black sheep. Rube’s family was the wrong religious persuasion, even though they were not practicing Jews, and Henry was simply the wrong color. Rube knew that Henry Rollins was alright when Nips, untrue to his nickname, went right up to the frightened boy and licked his hand. It was the first stranger Nips hadn’t nipped. That told Rube all he needed to know about his newfound friend.